xsianx Posted December 24, 2006 Report Share Posted December 24, 2006 (edited) You made my eyes water! lol not Cry just water. I still like Belle though.. Poor Martha. The ending (awww) Jack had better of dumped Sam afterwoods.. it was all her fault Great writing miss Lau. Edited January 23, 2016 by QUIET ACHIEVER Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted December 24, 2006 Report Share Posted December 24, 2006 Noooooo Martha's dead! Well I want to know why Belle killed her, why? Is this a one shot? I don't want it to be even though you killed Martha! Poor Jack, please update soon if its a long fic! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted December 24, 2006 Report Share Posted December 24, 2006 (edited) You're an evil, evil person. Lol. It was beautiful but so sad Damn you for killing her. It should have been freakin pixie girl dammnit! What did you do to my Belle?! Why did you have to make me so sad? Edited December 24, 2006 by Jamey-Maria Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted December 24, 2006 Report Share Posted December 24, 2006 OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG Laura, i hate you. You killed Martha. I hate people who kill Martha, so i hate you. I cant believe you killed Martha Poor Jacky baby Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gawguss_tiff Posted December 24, 2006 Report Share Posted December 24, 2006 ARGH you killed her omg BELLE!! aww that was soo sad i have teary eyes now great writting but i HATED the ending lol well excellent start or one shot whatever it was lol xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted December 24, 2006 Report Share Posted December 24, 2006 Awwwwww Can I just say, I actually have heard of someone who went through a very similar thing. Of course without Belle and Jack. In my lovely area someone had the same thing done, one of my Mum's friends from work. I was quite weirded out when I started reading the knife part, because that's what he'd done. Sick. But I'm not going to go into the details and stuff, because... 1. It's sick. 2. It's very sad. and 3. I'm supposed to be reviewing your fic!! See, this is what happens when you write a sad one shot! Don't do it again! Instead, write a happy one shot. Nice work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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