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Sarah_Lewis

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I have got to say that I loved Tracey in this fic. She's brilliant. Esepcially when she smirked at Zoe and told her that she knows it's her....

I loved how you captured Tracey's feelings. Like her shock and confusion about what to do and then just beeing such a good friend [if you call it that] to Zoe. You captured her very well, Andy.

I really am not happy about that ending, mainly because it's a cliffhanger. But, it's good. You keep your audience wanting to hound you for a next part to it. Or hopes that you will write a next part. *hint hint*

All in all, it was brilliantly written. :D

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