whispered_envy Posted December 12, 2008 Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 (edited) Aww, that's so cute! I love love love their interaction and friendship! You've written it so well! Great work, and I can't wait for the second part! Edited December 12, 2008 by whispered_envy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted December 12, 2008 Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 Awww i love their friendship Really well written Really looking forward to reading the second part Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted December 12, 2008 Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 Aw! that was really good! I like how you wrote how Aden felt, i could see him feeling that way! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anaya Posted December 12, 2008 Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 Aww. That was so sweet. And i'm glad that you've decided to do those scenes specifically, I felt cheated when they weren't included in the show. You'd think Aden would want to know, and if he did, would have had a reaction over the whole Elliot stuff. Also what i'm really looking forward to is the next update, because we really were cheated out of a touching scene after the courtcase. With Nic always wanting to know about his 'secret' and now that they were close, she'd certainly have more of a reaction to the abuse stuff then 'i'm proud of you'. Especially considering how moved she was in the courtroom. Great writing as usual. You write Nic and Aden and their interaction so perfectly, always enjoying reading it. Well done, update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted December 12, 2008 Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 My response just mirrors that of Anaya's, this piece of writing is really good and you should be proud of yourself for writing it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted December 12, 2008 Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 I liked both of those chapters. I thought we should have gotten that 2nd scene. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Awww loved it, i realy think we should of got the second scene in the show, so i'm really glad you covered it Great update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 (edited) Yes, those were two scenes that really should have been covered on the show, especially the second one.I thought the way the only question she had for him was if he was okay was very sweet.Good job! Edited December 13, 2008 by Red Ranger 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anaya Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 Damn it! I missed the update and I was looking forward to this scene the most. I saw your new fic, and I thought, why hasn't Karter updated this one. Only to find that you had. Aww. It was very touching. Especially Nic's "I'm sorry." & "Are you okay?" lines. I also loved Aden's nervousness and the awkwardness he felt over it all to begin with. And once they talked, how he wanted things to remain the same, and her not to treat him differently. I can imagine him wanting that and also Nic being so cool about it all and not making a big deal out of it. As long as he was okay. I also liked that it wasn't too soppy & over-emotional, and the fact that you kept in some of the funny, witty exchanges they are so well known for. That's how i'd expect them to react. Well written. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 I postively absolutely loved it, the way that Nicole brought a bit of humour into the conversation making it more interesting to read Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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