HighwayUnicorn Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Awww. It was so beautifully written Laura. Absolutely amazing. Well done. I love the way you ended it too. With Charlie not wanting children with David, yet she was okay to be in a relationship with him because she had to move on. Perfectly written & all characters & emotions were portrayed amazingly well. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Thanks for the dedication Laura totally appreciate it. I love how the story is set in the future and I never expected you to split up Chax but it worked well. Loved the children's names. They both sound so adorable. Especially Harry being so protective of Charlie. really adorable & cute. The last line is so perfect. It is so clear from the beginning to me that Charlie still harboured feelings fur Beax and that line about only having children with Brax is perfect. Thanks for writing such a fantastic one-shot & again thanks for the dedication Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Really good Laura I like relationship fics and future fics. Charlie has obviously grown up a lot in this. I felt it was a shame she didn't want children with David though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 That was awesome! I loved it, even though Charlie and Brax weren't actually together, I still thought it was great. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 I thought that was really nice. Charlie's emotions for Brax were just incredibly well written. And I love the fact that she had children with Brax, and would never have any with David. I loved this oneshot very much. It was incredibly well written and the emotions were spot on. Loved how protective Harry was of Charlie. Well done on a beautifully written fic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soph1303 Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Aww sad but cute oneshot. I really enjoyed it!! Great job!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dingo x Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Aww that was a really nice one shot Laura! Good work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucii Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Aww Charlie and Brax's children sound so cute! Can't believe they split up though Even though she wont hve any kids with David Loved this x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuvH&A Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 I really loved this!! one of my favourite one shots, I kind of wish it would have been a long fic because it was so interesting and well-written. Any chance? Thank you anyway...it was amazing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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