EmyKate68 Posted September 22, 2011 Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 Ooh interesting story! Not sure I liked the sad ending, but I thought it was really well written and you captured bianca and heath perfectly! I could picture heath's expression easily when he looked at bianca with his "eyebrows furrowed", he does that look a lot! I guess this story should be a warning as to what an actual relationship might be like for them. Really good: ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted September 22, 2011 Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 (edited) Ohhh such a great oneshot you had written really well!! I agree with EmyKate68's comment. Edited September 22, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 Great oneshot Laura Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teespazzr Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 Great Start! I look forward to more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soph1303 Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 Interesting one shot!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 I liked that story, Laura. It was really well written and I loved the emotions you used in it. Very well written, well done. Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 Oooh, I love Heath so I love reading one-shots with him in it and this one didnt disappoint, it was nice to see Heath struggling with something, it isnt a side of him you see that often so it was refreshing to see. Well done! xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucii Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 Fantastic oneshot Laura although I do feel sorry for both Heath and Bianca It was nice seeing the different sides to them though xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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